This was the writing task given to the students to work in a group. They were asked to develop a story from the given image. It was famous Panchtantra fable - The Lion and the Rat. The story written was to be submitted in 'Comments' section below the blog post.
You will find three comments below the blog and all three have different writing style. It ranges from simplistic writing in matter-of-fact style to highly literary style of giving an effect of emotions to environment. I hope you will enjoy reading the difference in three styles of writing.
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You will find three comments below the blog and all three have different writing style. It ranges from simplistic writing in matter-of-fact style to highly literary style of giving an effect of emotions to environment. I hope you will enjoy reading the difference in three styles of writing.
Visit this 'Blog 4 Teaching & Learning: Story Writing' to give your comments.
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Tuesday, August 4, 2009
Story Writing
Develop below given points into a story:
Write your story in the 'comments box'. To write in the 'coment box', clik on 'comments' at the end of this blog. Wait for the new page to open. Write in the given space and publish your comment. Use your google account for log in and identification. Publish one post named as 'Feedback on Story Writing'. Teacher's comments on your story will be published in the 'comments' of your blog.
* Lion sleeping beneath a tree - rat came to play - climbed over the body of the lion - unknown to dangers, rat started playing with whiskers of the lion - lion wake up - angrily roared - rat trembled - lion ready to savour the rat - the rat begged to be pardoned - promised to help him in the hours of need - arrogance of lion smugged at rat - left alive - lion trapped by hunter in the net - roared for help - rat came with fellow friends - lion saved - friends forever.
The moral of the story is:
1. Friend in need in friend indeed.
2. Never trust mousy friends.
3. One never knows how one can be helpful to others.
unknown to the dangers and it started playing with whiskers of the lion. Soon the lion woke up and roared angrily. The rat
started trembling. The lion was ready to svour the rat. The rat begged the lion to pardon and promised to help him in the
hours of need. At that time, the arogant lion smugged at the rat and left it alive. After some days the lion was trapped
by hunter in the net. The lion began to roar for help. soon the rat came with fellow friends and saved the life of lion.
And then they were friends forever.
The moral of the story is:
- One never knows how one can be helpful to others.
There he saw a lion.Unknown to the dangers of lion,he climbed over the body of the lion and started playing with his whiskers.
suddenly,the lion woke up and roared in anger.The rat was trembling in fear.Watching a trembling rat,the lion pitied him.The rat was ashamed
for his deed and begged to be pardoned.He also promissed the lion that he will help him in his critacal times.
The lion,in a mood of disgust smugged at rat ang left him alive.Then one day a group of hunters trapped the lion in a net.
A poor lion roared for help.As soon as the rat came to know about the trapping of lion,he came with a few friends and cut the
net.In this way he saved the lion.After that incident,they remained friends forever.
THE MORAL OF THE STORY:
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
2.Never underestimate anyone in your life because you never know how one can be helpful to others.
3.friendship is like water,no shape,no place,no
taste.But it is still essential for living.
But,how can a small creature help 'A KING'?.The king smugged the rat and gave him a chance to live.
The flow of time never remains the same.After few days The king was trapped by hunters in the net.It was so called pity of him.He craved and roared for help.The rat,being a being of blood and flesh,without thinking anything came with fellow friends and anyhow managed to save the King by cutting the stings of tne net.Only afterwards the lion understood the value of friendship and became the friends forever.